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Waiting until the last minute to pack for trips is the best you guys.
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What structural aspect of your pup's canon is less than ideal? Is it redundant descriptions? A poorly fleshed out character? No clear rules for magic? Not enough history? A flimsy culture?
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What structural aspect of your pup's canon is less than ideal? Is it redundant descriptions? A poorly fleshed out character? No clear rules for magic? Not enough history? A flimsy culture?
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And if your entire plot revolves around the entire cast holding the idiot ball there's something wrong. This is me eying you, Evil Giles.
Ender's Game Card has said in the introduction to one of his books that he can't timeline or age up characters. Yeah. There are some fairly blatent structural inconsistancies surrounding Valentine and her age. Argh.
Rent and Les Mis are musicals. They're hampered by the fact that you can only get so much backstory into a two-to-three hour musical. However, I don't really have many complaints about either of them. I've pulled shit out of throw-away lines in Rent for ages.