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[themightyspazz]

Waiting until the last minute to pack for trips is the best you guys.

From bjornwilde:

What structural aspect of your pup's canon is less than ideal? Is it redundant descriptions? A poorly fleshed out character? No clear rules for magic? Not enough history? A flimsy culture?

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[last_kallig]

For Kreyu: Dragon culture in the Mythic Age, or rather how canon gives no idea what it was like. What kind of culture DOES a species that does not reproduce and reincarnates with full memories make?

For Annabelle Newfield: Adventure! does not mesh well with later canon. The transition period between AEon being good guys and bad guys is not really explained at all. (This is what happens when you write things in reverse order and crank out a book during the last gasps of a line's life.)

For Ibani (The Sith Inquisitor) The whole MMO thing makes stuff tricky. In game your character starts off as an adult and goes from 'knows nothing' to apprentice in, like, days at most. Which makes no sense. Character development is erratic and they drop plot lines for no reason. But those are things I can FIX in Milliways. :-)